Desert Grey

gay elves and explosions
part 2, page 4
part 2, page 4
September 7, 2013 in Part 2
Average Rating: 4 (2 votes)
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corntown
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corntown
I just finished reading your series and to be honest, I'm having a hard time following what's going on. I think this is mainly due to having too many panels on each page, and there not being any space in between them.
surrealistdreamer
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surrealistdreamer
Yeah my pages have been over stuffed. I do agree. I'm making an effort to fix that which I think will help the pacing. Though I will have moments that are supposed be rather chaotic like on the previous page.