part 2, page 4
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corntown
7th Sep 2013
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I just finished reading your series and to be honest, I'm having a hard time following what's going on. I think this is mainly due to having too many panels on each page, and there not being any space in between them.
surrealistdreamer
7th Sep 2013
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Yeah my pages have been over stuffed. I do agree. I'm making an effort to fix that which I think will help the pacing. Though I will have moments that are supposed be rather chaotic like on the previous page.